想要写好一篇优秀的AEIS作文，提升自己作文的可读性是非常重要的，句子长、用词复杂并不代表你的作文就是优异的，重点还是在于要避免一些空洞的表达，下面小编就为大家介绍一下AEIS备考中需要注意的写作问题！

　　1.一些空洞的单词或词组不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完全可以被删掉。比如下面的句子：

　　When all things are considered， young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.

　　这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion”都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

　　2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换，例如：

　　Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents， they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

　　“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：

　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.

　　总的来说，在写作的过程中一些空洞的词汇不要出现，这样才能提升我们的整体成绩，不过也没有大家想象的那么复杂，只要好好备考，拿高分就不是难事。如果还想了解更多关于AEIS考试试卷、AEIS考试报名时间的信息，可以在线咨询我们或添加客服微信kewo11！