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　　AEIS高分范文:保护野生动物

　　Protecting wildlife has never been so essentialin the history of humanitywhen there are fewer places left that wild animals can call home. Thoughit is not without any reason thatsome people think protecting wild animals is a waste of resources, I certainly agree thatevery penny spent on it is worthwhile.

　　 词伙：

　　 （1）in the history of humanity 在人类历史上

　　（2）...it is not without any reason that... 做......是不无道理的

　　（3）...every penney spent on it is worthwhile 在它上面花的任何一分钱都值得

　　There are financial reasons why we need not to bother to save allendangered animal species. It would cost billions of dollars a year to preserve threatened wild animals. This is unthinkable for many, since millions of people are still suffering fromfood shortageand even more deprived of the opportunity to receive education because of poverty. It is still harder to understand why anyone would want to preserve such dangerous animals as tigers and wolves, whichpose a threat both topeople and livestock. Surely, it will be sad if there are not any more cute pandas on the planet, but it is not like that we depend on them. After all,what is the point ofprotecting threatened wild animals from dying out when human beings have their own problems to worry about?

　　 词伙：

　　 （1）endangered animal species 濒临灭绝的野生物种

　　（2）food shortage 粮食短缺

　　（3）pose a threat to... 对......构成威胁

　　（4）what is the point of （doing sth./ sth.）... 做......的意义何在？

　　However, protecting wild animals is important for the present as well asfuture generations. The Mother Nature requires that different species stay connected so that the extinction of one particular species might influence one or more other species along the line. If we as human beings stand at the top of thepyramid of ecosystem, our survivalis totally dependent onthe existence of other "lower" animals. Therefore, protecting wild animals can be a preventive step for humans to remain safe. This has become particularly urgent in the 21st century because much of the wild animal habitat has been destroyed by us human beings.

　　 词伙：

　　（1）future generations 子孙后代

　　（2）pyramid of ecosystem 生态系统的金字塔

　　（3）be dependent on... 取决于；依靠......

　　In conclusion,far fromhaving no connection to our survival,wild animals are the precondition for us to exist on this planet. We certainly need to take care of our own problems, yet if all wild animals perish, we human beings will perishas well.

　　 词伙：

　　（1）far from... 远非......

　　（2）...as well 也；同样　　　　

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