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　　谚语俗语？生搬硬套，张冠李戴

　　1.Power is knowledge. Like is the best teacher.

　　正确表述：Interest is the best teacher.

　　兴趣是最好的老师。

　　2. So there is a while, where is a there.

　　正确表述：Where there‘’s a will, theres a way.

　　有志者，事竟成。

　　3. Many students have to good good study day day up.

　　正确表述：Study hard and make progress every day.

　　好好学习，天天向上。

　　4. Everything has two coins.

　　正确表述：Every coin has two sides / Everything is a two-edged sword.

　　事物都有两面性。

　　5. How long our life, we should reading books how long.

　　正确表述：It is never too old to learn.

　　活到老，学到老。

　　6. There is a beautiful girl /golden house in the book.

　　正确表述：Wealth and beauty can be gained through diligent study.

　　书中自有黄金屋，书中自有颜如玉。

　　7. Reading is life what sky is bird.

　　正确句型：A is to B what C is to D。

　　8. To me say / it is sees to me… / in point from my view… / So as far as I’m considered, …

　　（在我看来……）

　　9. Give you fish rather than give you fishes.

　　正确表述：Give a man a fish, and you feed him for a day. Teach a man to fish, and you feed him for a lifetime.

　　授人以鱼不如授人以渔。

　　10. There is asaid, open the book is good.

　　正确表述：As the saying goes: Reading is always beneficial.

　　俗话说：开卷有益。

　　11. If you read 10,000 of books, that you can write likeGod.

　　正确表述：Ample reading produces fluent writing.

　　读书破万卷，下笔如有神。

　　云里雾里，不知所云

　　1.Our's students know more knowledge is we should do.

　　2. Bad books more the good books, you must learning to choise.

　　3. Parters hope reading that's good with our yestodays.

　　4.Now with the rapid development of advanced our life, the reading have been a popularity problem. As to whether it is a blessing of a curse…(模板乱了……)

　　煽情忏悔，恳求通过

　　1.Today I really know myEglishis bad. I will study Eglish after this text,turstme please.

　　这次考试后学英语？可以相信你吗？

　　2. Lao shi jiu rang wo guo ba! Wo yi jing lian xu san nian mei kao shang le. Zai bu guo jiu mei you xue wei zheng le. Wang lao shi da fa ci bei，rang wo guo.（用拼音冒充英文！）

　　老师就让我过吧……我连续三年没考过了。再不过就没有学位证了。望老师大发慈悲，让我过吧……

　　3. Please give me some marks for me. Thanks.

　　给点分吧

　　4. As a college student who will be finished college life, I think I was very failed, because I haven't gone to thelibaryat once.

　　我很失败，从未去过图书馆……

　　（图书馆拼写错误，看来你真的不爱它）

　　5. I'm allowed a lot minutes to write a short essay. I think I can't do it.(接着抄袭阅读理解) I'm should startmy essay with a brief…(抄指令，还知道变第一个人称……)

　　八

　　演讲体？对话体？故事体？

　　尽情发挥，信马由缰

　　1.Ok, today all over to have. Goodbey.

　　今天的课上到这儿，再见！

　　2. Good morning, everybody. Now we are start lesson. Please everybody stand up and sit down. You should start you essay with a …

　　大家早上好！开始上课，起立坐下（抄作文指令）

　　3. Boy: I don't know buy what?

　　Woman: what is you like?

　　(整个作文由对白构成)

　　4. Many habit was nothing. Parents in order to making me happy and working hard. However, no work. Then my class came a teacher…

　　父母无能为力，老师改变了我……

　　5. As Confucius constructed:briefed matters much in one's life.

　　孔老夫子说过这句话吗?

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